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Taste the ash
The ash on your tongue
The ash born from the flames that once burned within you
You were once this flame
Blinded by the fires
The heat consumed you
But they are gone now
They died with you
They died with your will
Your will to live
Your will to breathe
Your will to see the sunlight, or even moonlight
You say you are trapped within these shadows
But there are no shadows here
There would have to be light for there to be shadows
Shadows are dark, but so is ash
Taste the ash
The ash from inside you
Okay, this is one of my more morbid poems. I got the idea for it watching this video: [link] Yeah, at the very end he says, "Wake up and smell the ash." Sooo yep. :iconballoonplz: :iconballooonplz:


The video is from the makers of the "Pokemon Abridged" series. Go watch it! It's hilarious if you watch or have ever watched the original Pokemon show! I love the abridged series though! :heart:
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XxRaexAnnexX Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011  Student General Artist
WoW
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tintedslightly Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Good wow or bad wow?
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XxRaexAnnexX Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2011  Student General Artist
Good wow
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tintedslightly Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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kittyblack13 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful. great word choice and construction.
Morbid, but deep. :clap:
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tintedslightly Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:glomp: Thanks! ^^ I really like this one so I'm glad you even took the time to read and comment. :tighthug:
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kittyblack13 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
haha you are very welcome! :hug:
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Jenny-Winter Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You are a poet! :iconiloveyouplz:
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tintedslightly Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks ^^
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