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For some reason,I am drawn to this image.It really stands out.A bit of constructive help though.I am seeing something in the face area.It seems that it is a bit "lumpy"?.If that was intentional,please by all means get back to me.But overall I really like the way you drew it.It is original, and very well shaded, and i like how the colors work out. Nicely done my friend,keep up the good work c:

-I hope you didn't find my critique too harsh.This is my first one since I just got my PM.Please, if i was rude, let me know C: ~ Crystal